At night I walk in sleepy wonder
Of what this world
May not be
In subtle dreams
I often wonder
If poison tastes
Like our disease
Be not still
Oh, flailing conscious
Tell a story
Of one’s regret
Lest we wake
Upon the morn
Lest we wake
And then forget
Wonderful. One of your best in my opinion 😊
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Wow! Thank you so much! Muses… What are you going to do?
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Yes exactly 😉
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One of your best so far!! Beautiful!
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Well, thank you very much for such a nice compliment!
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Just stating what is obvious to me. Your very welcome. I look forward to reading each day! It’s a great way to start the day!
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Thank you! God only knows what comes out next, but the muse finds a way. Ha
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😁
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The dancing mind at night always seeking a new story or snow adventure…sometimes I think our brains forget it too needs rest. Lol😉
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True, and then the muse has a way of creating when the muse needs to create… Thank you, Jenna!
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You’re welcome Kevin! 😊 Very true😁
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Wonderful rhythm!
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Thank you so much!
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“I often wonder
If poison tastes
Like our disease”
*mind explodes*
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Yeah, that was weird when I wrote it, but it really grew on me too. Thank you so much for reading and commenting… ;-)))
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Superb!❤️
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Thank you! This one must have had something as a lot of folks really like it.
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Yesss!!!! It’s got a good rhyme and melody to it!😊
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Sometimes the spaghetti sticks…
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I really like this poem! 🙂 Great job!
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Thank you! It seems to resonate… I had no idea it would.
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Wonderful Vibe, love the Rhythm of this Piece. Many can definitely relate. Excellent, so beautifully written.
Yonnie💜
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You are too sweet! Thank you!
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Thanks so very much Kevin
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Another gem…
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Thank you, friend!
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Fascinating! Just pondering on a “flailing conscious”… 🙂
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Not too much of a stretch for some… ha
Thank you for reading!
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You’re welcome! It’s nice to get acquainted with someone new. 🙂
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Indeed!
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I have to agree with others. This is one of your best!
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Awe… Thank you so much! Who knew? Ha
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You’re welcome, Kevin!
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Hi Kevin. Thanks so much for the follow on I Write Her. Sincerely appreciate it. 🙂 I do hope you will enjoy my work as much as I think I will enjoy yours. Have a great day!
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Absolutely!
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🙂
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