Limbo came to haunt my dreams
In iridescent blues and greens
Tiny lightning strikes my synapses
Holding me hostage
Convoluted climaxes
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Escape, futile while chained in place
Bogging down further during the race
The ball is heavy
The weight stays still
Thoroughly testing all my will
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Reflection I see in the mirror of time
Contorted and strained is every line
My voice is silent
I try to yell
Never shall I elude this hell
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Breaking point, I shall not die
Some glimmer of hope touches my eye
I’m still here
Upon my bed
No longer asleep to wake up dead
This is a great poem, Kevin!
P.S. I don’t know if it’s only me but I see your some of your words gluing together, Kevin.
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Thank you, Winnie! I’ll check it out too!
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You’re welcome, Kevin!
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Thank you, Winnie!
I went out and looked, but I didn’t see anything sticking together. I see this from time to time with others, but usually only on my phone.
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You’re welcome, Kevin! Oh, it’s definitely on y part then. I’m using my phone since my youngest always uses my laptop. Thank you for this.
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Gotcha!
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Ooh, dark, Kevin! Much darker than your usual fare.
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Ha… Yeah, my wife made a similar comment. I can get very, very dark, but I’m not sure that’s what the audience wants… Maybe, I should dabble and let some seep out there… Just a thought!
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If I knew what audiences wanted, I’d have more followers and wouldn’t be so afraid to submit things to journals!
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I hear ya!
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Pretty dark, but pretty great! I love your poetry Kevin!
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Thank you, Kelley! That’s so very kind! My wife made the same comment about this one… Ha
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Us wonderful women think alike! ❤️️☺️❤️️
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I will not argue…
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haha….she taught you well. Happy wife…happy life!
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Indeed! I adore my precious wife!
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Ah, she has a good one!❤️️☺️❤️️
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Thank you! We took awhile with a few hits and misses, but God’s timing is always right! Then again, we’ve known one another for more than 50 years. Ha…
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